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Power of friendship? Getting stronger when you’re enraged? Powerful monster sealed in you by your... Read more
Power of friendship? Getting stronger when you’re enraged? Powerful monster sealed in you by your father?Yeah, that was not me.I was the arrogant youngster who got punched on the first panels of the shounen manga I was reading.I wouldn’t have even remembered his name if I wasn’t stuck in his body.***Release schedule: 7 chapters a weekTags and content warnings are mainly to give me creative freedom later on. This is my first novel ever, and English isn’t my native language, so go easy on me fellas. Any feedback is more than welcome, of course. Collapse
Portal Fantasy, Isekai, Character Growth, Strategist, Male Protagonist, Sword And Magic, Mythology, Reincarnation, Secret Identity, Weak to Strong
Started off good, bht character development took weird turn, which was not my cup of tea, guess 3.5/5.
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Hey can anybody recommend some novels in which characters have unique powers and limitations like this one
At first it seemed like just a bad HxH, but it didn't take long for it to become incredible.It's a shame that I lost all pleasure in reading from the moment that non-sense princess was added. How can a single character ruin an entire story? Wow.Of course this is just my opinion, it may be different for someone else.
Writing quality is pretty good and the story so far has been very consistent. If you're looking for something to read that's slightly comedic with a hint of seriousness, then I'd recommend this one. Only read up to Ch 130 and have dropped it to collect more chapters, but so far, I'd give it a solid 4/5. You won't regret reading it even to pass your time.
If you like Naruto, Jujutsu Kaizen, and Black Clover then there's a pretty good chance that you'll like this... story seems to be inspired from these three and has borrowed a lot of elements, including characters' backstory and design, from them. Not to say its rip-off but if youve seen the anime or read the manga for these three you will make the connections real soon. Will give it 3.5/5
This inspires a shounen very well. The only flaw is that it's quite fast at times, but some might say that the author only focuses on the important stuff. Compared to the author's point of view I think that's the only difference, I thought I was reading a Korean novel, apart from this little thing this is very good, it has a fun plot and great characters, I highly recommend reading it. This story has a true essence, I don't see it as just another clichéRating: 4.7/5-Isso inspira muito bem um shounen. A única falha é que às vezes é bastante rápido, mas alguns podem dizer que o autor se concentra apenas nas coisas importantes. Comparado com o ponto de vista do autor acho que essa é a única diferença, achei que estava lendo um romance coreano, tirando essa coisinha isso é muito bom, tem um enredo divertido e ótimos personagens, recomendo fortemente a leitura. Essa história tem uma verdadeira essência, não a vejo como só mais um clichêClassificação: 4,7/5
As always, when I find a good novel I read the comment with the highest downvote... Let's start searching!
This is surprisingly good. The story development is...wonky but it's nice. The writing quality is alright. It's not the best but it aint the worst. The background of the world is....kinda eh but it's better then most. And the characters are...well the characters fit the Shonen theme.The only takeaway is that it feels kinda bland early on. Maybe for 20-60 chapters? Other then that it's a solid 3.5-4.
I'm not one to criticize reviews but that's probably the worst review I have ever read, "He's a good guy but he drinks infant blood".
That's fair. I could've worded it better but I'm way too lazy to do that. Anywho is "He's a good guy but he drinks infant blood" a thing I said or just a thing you're saying? I'm confused cause I didn't say it and you're using(?) it as an example.Either way good people can still be gold people. It's just a matter of perspective. I mean people consider soldiers of war heroes or mass murders and etc depending on what you the side their on.That also goes with forced cannibalism. No matter if they eat to survive or were forced to they will be liable to criminal or civil actions even if they were a good person.Not saying that a f#cking serial killer or whatever is a good person. Just saying that sometimes it's a matter of perspective and not all bad people are well "bad" and good people are "good" or whatever. I think that conveys what I'm trying to say? Dunno. Might edit it later when I can think of something better
You had me at the "this is surprisingly good"The rest of the review just doesnt match the good.
I mean...it is surprisingly good. The review doesn't match what I said cause well I gotta be honest cause it's a review. And despite that it's still good. I do get your point though, it is confusing
I don't know how to exactly articulate this, but the story lacks that sort of energy and flow that a lot of other novels have (even the shittier ones). It feels like if the author adopted the story from somewhere else, and subsequently wrote the story while ignoring nuances and other elements of intentional design. A rant on what this novel reminds me ofThe closest comparison I have is when a translator started writing the chapters instead of translating the original text, and made me lose interest due to the translator's ignorance of some of the more subtle plotlines. To be fair, I did try to read their 'additions', but the translator simply did not capture the style and nuances of character that the original author had. Oh, and the translator didn't even separate the contents of his additions into a separate novel, he straight up appended it to the original translation that he did. If someone didn't see the translator's notes, the only way they could tell it was written by the translator was by the sudden drop in story quality.For something that's sort of like what I'm trying to say, see Ehbom's review on RoyalRoad.
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