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A sick 16 year old MC dies at the same time, emerald eyes open up confused. Shouldn't I be dead?... Read more
A sick 16 year old MC dies at the same time, emerald eyes open up confused. Shouldn't I be dead? Why the hell am I so tiny? What's her name? What are these voices in my head?Follow the young telepath as they make way in a world of gods and magic. Will they make their mark in this scary world or did they already do so. F*ck, time travel is really confusing.***I will admit that the first part of the story is pretty bad. It was my first time writing anything for fun so I was pretty green. If you're prepared to suffer through the first twenty chapters or so, and the story should get a lot better. Collapse
Female Protagonist, Magic, Overpowered Protagonist, Reincarnation, Time Travel, Modern Day, Alternate World, Weak to Strong, Fanfiction, Marvel, Harry Potter, X-men, Futuristic Setting
The worst thing I've read
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I write this from chapter 81. I have mixed feelings about this. In the beginning there are soo many twist and turns that it feels weird. And throughout the story, the story goes back and forth in time every other chapter and it feels like it is more novel mixed as one. I also do not like that the author made the mc op in according to the mc universe even more the HP, but keeps nerfing the mc. The writing is fine, the story is connected but is just all over the place and it is to much for my taste.
I tried reading it but stopped at chapter 136. I will say, the author is brilliant and good at writing no doubt, and the story in it self is well written. But i do not like the story in it self. In the beginning it goes back and forth with soo so many twist and turns that is is confusing a bit. Then you go a bit more in to the story and over haft of the story is going back and forth in time/flashbacks. When the plot actually when't back on track agian the story and what happened did not site well with me so i dropped it. The story is all over the place but well connected. 2/5 stars for me
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too complicated, dont know why author is writing webnovel with his big brain he should go work for NASA or cure cancer.
It's a rather good story, but I don't quite like how the author liked making characters in good alignment into villains. Also, there are many instances where I feel strange how magic works in this world was different to what I know. Still, given the author fusing marvel and harry potter, I expect some changes, so it doesn't bother me that much. What I don't like the most was the author shifting into different timelines; although it was to flesh out the experiences of MC after traveling back to time, I think it wasn't that neccessary.
I have read all the available chapts so far(265). I will start with the fact that this story is VERY well written. The author intricately combines, HP, Marvel, And historical mythos to deliver a very compelling story. There are some time travel shenanigans that create a very OP mc but the author does a good job of creating interesting solutions to the mc's problems that are not always related to power level. The world building is slow at first, but the different worlds mesh together surprisingly well. And lastly, the most impactful part of this fan fic is the characters. Everyone has all these unique personalities motivations that make them feel like genuine people. Every character's personal trauma and ambition is taken into account for every decision they make. It is very well put together.If I could point out any cons to this story, it would be that the author hates the prevalent leaders from all the source materials he uses. Its like he has a vendetta against the world leaders in HP, Marvel, and all greek mythology. That remark is a little biased because I have grown to respect major marvel leaders like Charles Xavier. Summary: 4.5/5 - Fantastic fanfic with very well written characters and scenarios.
I won't say he deserved to be burned... because that would be a crime, after this bald man denied help to spider man, I lost any respect for him... apart from his perverted parallel life, and the fact that he practically lobotomized himself so as not to become an enemy of humanity in any way is a good thing... but when at the expense of his precious students, I don't think it is.
Bald ? Friend, was it the MC who DIDN'T want to help our Neighborhood Friend?
I really liked the first 100+ chapters but the female protag perspective does feel a weird as a male reader... But the story is good!
I dont understand the dislikes. Usually i put myself into the MC role so putting myself into a FL is kind of weird. It wont ruin the story but it's just kind of weird
I hope it's good since there are so many bad novels with a FMC
really enjoy this one I think the mix between hp and marvel works fine (for those who worry, these two worlds doesn’t really meet each other, So you don’t have to expect Dumbledore fighting against iron man for example).SpoilerI like the idea of the time travel, so that we have a strong and experienced mc, who doesn’t run all over the place doing typical noob mc stuff.Plus I like the flashbacks we get and how they are also relevant for the „current time“ 1995-2013 and not just random unnecessary storie.SpoilerI don’t know why but all those big characters that are normally leaders in their group are villains in this novel … Dumbeldore, Xavier and nick furry
Nick furry is the worst
This a dark type novel, fanfictions are really blended well,who have thought Dumbledore was Villain and what will really happen potter's are alive this is marvelous way to think.i also like how her past persona works sometimes mess up through ,i think it is a common fault of immortal to have some overconfidence. Hope novel go all the way like this
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