Heaven, Earth, Me

Chapter 169

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Author Note: Prepare your hearts, dears. This chapter dives deeper into what happened to Kali.

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Yasenia opened both their mouths with her lips and placed the tip on the side. Then, she released her sweet nectar.

Kali had her mouth filled with a warm, delicious, thick liquid while Yasenia’s tongue scooped some of it out of her mouth. Then, Kali gulped, and Yasenia’s cum went down her throat.

The feeling of it going down sent electric currents up to her brain, and her world turned white. Her eyes rolled up, and her body tensed. Kali gurgled with the semen as it wrecked her body in euphoria. “OHHHH!!!”

She continuously squirted from her sex as the big orgasm wreaked havoc in her brain. It was something she had never felt.

Kali, as any other person would do, continued gulping the heavenly nectar as it entered her mouth to continue feeling these heavenly sensations. Even if Kali was going through a trip on the Pleasure realm, Yasenia was taking out most of it and ingesting it herself to prevent Kali’s pleasure senses from overloading more than they currently were.

However, the sensations in her unaccustomed body were making Kali spasm.

This was the result of Yasenia’s current strength in sexual prowess. The effects only became evident when she had sex with someone that hadn’t been growing with it before it was this powerful. The purity, energy amount, nourishment, and pleasure it gave were completely overwhelming for a normal cultivator of a similar level to her. It was as if the body screamed with joy after ingesting a heavenly treasure made especially for it.

When Yasenia stopped cumming, she placed her tail around Kali’s head and across her spine, using its greatly improved energy absorption qualities to reduce the pleasure waves that were still overwhelming Kali.

Yasenia hugged the drooling, spasming, moaning, and squirting woman with slight worry. ‘Even when I drank most of it myself, she is still like this… Thankfully I thought about controlling how much she ingests, or I may have damaged her irreversibly.’

Yasenia looked around and didn’t see Flora, so she supposed that Kali was still out of real danger.

Kali’s squirting went on until she was completely empty, but even then, her spasms continued. Yasenia noticed that the intensity had lowered by a lot, but Kali was still mid-orgasm! Yasenia frowned, ‘Is this what happens to those unaccustomed to me? This is… Dangerous.’

Ten minutes later, when Yasenia began really worrying, Kali came down from the big orgasm, and, as Yasenia expected, she began to tremble extremely badly. However, this tremble wasn’t from pleasure but a deep fear that the orgasm had aroused.

After Kali came down from the orgasm, she didn’t even know where she was or what had happened to her. She was in an extremely strange state, clearly awake, but with her mind somewhere else and her eyes somewhat unfocused. Then, feeling the lingering pleasure, a black miasma began wrapping around her as she dazedly started mumbling things like “no more, no more” or “please stop, someone help.”

Yasenia hissed as the corruptive aura of the powerful Heart Demon was damaging her own heart, making some flashbacks of Tian Long’s aura appear in her mind. However, she didn’t loosen her hug. Instead, Yasenia had her heart twisting seeing her like that. She still didn’t see Flora intervening. So, Yasenia did what she usually did.

Not minding about this miasma that was trying to hurt her own heart, she hugged her close and spoke softly to her ear, gently caressing her head as she normally does. “You are with me, honey. I’m here. I’m here. No one else is beside us. No one can hurt you when you are by my side. You are with Yasenia, your lover. We are in your room, doing good things together.”

Outside, Flora was fidgeting, sometimes wanting to move forward, and then stopping herself. She wanted her young miss to be the one resolving this so that Kali wouldn’t rely on Flora when they were about to do something like this again.

Flora wanted Kali and Yasenia to be able to have an intimate time without thinking about someone watching over them. ‘Miss Kali is still out of real danger, but if miss doesn’t do something soon… The heart demons may consume her. I will intervene just before that happens.’

Meanwhile, when Kali heard Yasenia’s voice, she latched onto Yasenia, wounding her arms and legs around her, and burying her face in her neck. Then she said with a brittle voice, “H-Help, please help me; they are, they are…” Kali’s eyes were wandering around, unfocused, and looking at nothing and something simultaneously.

Yasenia tightened the hug as her heart also tightened and consoled her further, “Don’t worry, don’t worry, I’m here. I’m here…”

As Yasenia continued speaking with her, the miasma shrunk and returned to Kali’s body. Yasenia really wanted to rip apart, chew, and devour that miasma, but she didn’t have the skill nor methods to do that. It was different from the thing that affected Cecile in the past, instead of artificial, it was a naturally born heart demon, and these could only be defeated by a mentality change from the cultivator bearing them.

As if the miasma calming down was the cue, Kali started to return back to reality more and more. Yasenia didn’t stop her coaxing while thinking, ‘Her heart demons must have used the lapse when Kali had her orgasm to induce illusions on her… Thank the heavens I didn’t let her drink too much of it….’

Even if some people would find it somewhat disgusting drinking her own release, Yasenia didn’t mind doing it for Kali, especially after seeing what just happened. Instead, she was extremely glad she did that.

Meanwhile, Flora was with a hand on the door and with the entirety of her spiritual sense all over them, attentive to any slight changes in Kali’s aura. She was so focused that even a mortal would be able to sneak on her right now.

She saw that Yasenia was taking care of it alone, so she didn’t interrupt. ‘Thankfully, the young miss managed to do it… Her aura, scent, and tail properties, combined with Miss Kali’s familiarity with young miss’ voice and body are making her relax.’

However, she didn’t lose focus for a second, her miss was counting on her in case something went wrong, and she had taken a liking to Kali during these months. She found her heart strength admirable; it was extremely rare that someone could live with the powerful heart demons that Kali bore and remain a sane and functional person.

Besides her normal timid behavior, slight stuttering, and other small signals, you wouldn’t find anything wrong with Kali at first glance, and that is what made Flora’s respect for her soar. She was determined to aid her young miss in healing Kali’s heart demons with all her strength and experience in the matter.

Kali returned to herself after another ten minutes, still with a rapid breathing rate but aware of her surroundings. Some time passed with Yasenia just caressing her and Kali calming down completely. Then, Kali remembered what had happened; she looked up at Yasenia and teared up, ashamed of her reaction. ‘I-I can’t even have proper intimate relationships! I-I’m a failure!’

Seeing her cry, Yasenia almost freaked out and asked, concerned. “What’s wrong, honey? Are you still afraid? Don’t worry. I will stay by your side as much as you need. I will tell you all the times you need to hear it; by my side, you are safe. I won’t let anybody do anything to you while I have a single breath in me!”

Kali directly burst into tears and hugged Yasenia. She choked out her words in between sniffles from crying. “H-How can you s-say that for s-some-someone like me… I’m a worth-worthless woman! Used u-until I couldn’t even move! T-They used me until s-some c-called me dead frog because, because m-my posture! While they, they used a poisoned k-knife to…”

Yasenia’s irises became redder the more she listened until she cut her with a kiss. Yasenia feared that she might go on a rampage instantly if she continued listening. However, this didn’t mean that the anger lessened. This debt will be paid with large amounts of painful screams and agony, ‘I will find them all, and I will make them suffer a hundredfold this suffering!’

She looked into Kali’s eyes with her red slit eyes and said with a gentle but firm tone, “Don’t you dare call yourself worthless, my love. You are an impressive woman, Kali. A genius cultivator with a gift others can only dream about in alchemy and medicine. An extremely rare plant summoner and someone that has fought against terrible heart demons and didn’t bend against them. Kali, my love, you are a woman with one of the strongest hearts I will ever know.”

Kali continued crying but was listening to Yasenia. Yasenia kissed her eyes as she continued speaking, “It doesn’t matter if you have defects, don’t all of us have them? So what if your face is scarred. Your heart, personality, and talents are untouched by your physical appearance. Do you know why I fell in love with you, Kali?”

Kali shook her head, now just sobbing. Yasenia used a handkerchief to wipe her face gently and said, “I fell in love with your determination to push forward, with the initiative you showed when speaking with me at the beginning, with the strong cultivator that dominated the battlefield with her summons, with the knowledgeable woman that improved my understanding in alchemy with few sentences.”

Yasenia looked into her eyes firmly and said with a prideful smile, “I fell in love with the woman that had the will to confess to someone they liked, even while they think they are not worth it. The woman that said “I love you,” even if the insecurities inside of her are overwhelming.”

Kali began crying again, but for a completely different reason.

Yasenia said with a smile, “Don’t you find attractive the woman I described? I find her an extremely good catch~, and those that are unable to see through her rough exterior and see the jewel she is inside; they are just fools with eyesight problems.”

Kali hugged Yasenia as strong as she could and said while sobbing, “I lov-love you!”

Yasenia just surrounded Kali with her body and pampered her. Kali was extremely tired after this emotional rollercoaster, so, with the soft caresses and loving actions of the dragoness, Kali fell asleep between Yasenia’s arms, filled with security and warm feelings. Yasenia waited a bit, and when Kali was deeply asleep, she called Flora softly, “Flora, come in.”

Flora entered with silent steps and reached beside Yasenia. Yasenia said, “Tell the others I won’t be able to go to their rooms. Superficially Explain what happened. Also, tell them that tonight I will sleep here and if they want to come, to be silent… Right, use your energy to clean the bed and us.”

Flora bowed and waved her hand, cleaning everything in just a second. Then, she turned and left the room.

Yasenia fell asleep shortly after, looking at Kali’s scarred face and thinking about how to make her speak about the group that did what they did to her. Then, she would find every single one of them, capturing them and torturing them until Yasenia got bored of hearing their screams and pleas and seeing them suffer.

This time there wasn’t a phoenix race that could stop her from carrying out her vengeance. ‘And if there is, then I will wait until I’m strong enough to get them without no one being able to stop me! No matter how much time passes, I won’t let them die a natural death!’

Today, some people that did something out of impulse gained a dragon as an enemy, and dragons don’t let grudges down easily.

Many people might think that Yasenia’s attitude is hypocritical, and they would be correct. Yasenia isn’t a defender of morals or someone that would sacrifice herself for the greater benefit. Yasenia was someone that wouldn’t care about what someone did until they messed with her family or someone she cared about.

Then, if that someone attacks her family, she will try to kill them swiftly to avoid letting them come back with revenge. She would only stop and take it slow if she had 100% security about finishing off her enemy.

Her mother, Tatyana, is the prime example of why Yasenia had this mentality. She is the living proof of what happened to those that took their enemy lightly and let her mother escape.

From some tales she had heard from Tatyana, they thought that she wouldn’t be strong enough to get her revenge, and this led to Tatyana being able to escape.

The one alive today is Tatyana, wielding power those people only dreamt about. And those that looked down on her are dead or worse.

The others reached one by one, silently lying around Yasenia and Kali and falling asleep comfortably thanks to the dragoness’s presence. Like that, the eventful day came to an end.

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Well, I deleted my previous review because of two important things. My update schedule will be every day at 20:30 GMT+7 until further notice. The second point is that I didn’t give my novel 5 stars and that is blasphemy, Why did you just think I’m shameless? I’m not, I totally didn’t feel envious of all the other authors that do the same. Finally, I’m writing this novel for fun (at least currently)! Moreover, it is my first time writing anything. If that was not enough, English is not my first language. But don’t worry! I’m using two different grammar correcting software! So, it shouldn’t be bad, I hope you don’t leave because of this. I hope I didn’t forget anything… I actually did! Any questions or suggestions about the novel write below. I will answer all of them unless they are nonsense of course. And please refrain from using swear words. If you don’t like something about my novel, tell me normally. I only have the outline of the plot and some stacked chapters so changing things is possible!

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I can only say that