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How is it you go about defining good and evil? A question that has plagued the mind of our... Read more How is it you go about defining good and evil? A question that has plagued the mind of our protagonist ever since he was born.…Floid, a young man born on earth suddenly finds himself transported into a world of magic and demons after playing the mysterious game 'Rivalle'. But in this world, he is reincarnated as a demon instead of the regular hero he played as.Join Floid as he paves his own path in this new world as a demons while facing suspicion for looking just like the greatest enemy of the demons, the hero.***I’d like to put this here for all those who will be interested in reading. This book is not the sort of novel where the main character goes around taking all the abilities in the world for himself. Nor would it be a book where only the main character has screen time and we only focus on what he’s doing as he goes around saving damsels in distress. I want to write a novel where all the characters have their personalities and trials. The readers do not have to love only the MC since all the characters have something worth relating to, they can like any of the characters.There will be powers that the MC cannot have (Ever) and people the MC cannot fight (For now). Things will happen outside of the MC’s control and he might never even know about it. If things like these aren’t to your liking, or if you want a book where you just watch the MC run around and spawn crazy skills mindlessly, then this book might not be for you. But if you can stay with me on this journey, I promise to write something you’ll love.…This book will be a mix of magic, kingdom building and an absurdly interesting cast of characters. Everything that they do will be perfectly explained and all questions are welcome. Just like always, I will make a discord for us all to meet and see our favorite characters soon!…I’m currently working hard to correct some spelling errors in some chapters, so if you see any unfixed errors, please bear with me. Current Progress — Chapter 19.…Please note, the harem will not be beyond five members and they will all be demon girls. The main character has a distaste for human nature and so he will not have any special relationship with any of them other than occasional sex.Thank you and see you inside! Collapse Overpowered Protagonist, Antihero Protagonist, Magic, Demons, Transmigration, Kingdom Building, Beastkin, Male Protagonist, R-18, Non-human Protagonist, Weak to Strong ?????. It's just bad. DISCLAIMER: I read only 20 chapters. Skipped to chapter 210 to see if the writing style gets better. It does not. Childish was my first thought. Childish was also my final thought. The story is childish in every single aspect.The writing style feels like a kid telling you what he accomplished today on modded minecraft creative playthrough. No semantic plays, no word games, no metaphors, no nothing. Just a hurried telling of a few actions and thoughts with a little bit of underdeveloped dialogue. Personally I found it bearable, but annoying nonetheless. 1/5The bigger problem was the plot. There was no plot. It was just a full of none-sense western style isekai power trip. Even the "battles" are just badly narrated scenes taken straight from anime. Here and there, the narrator tries to make out the mc as smart by throwing out random googled info about economy, farming or strategy, but it fails miserably. The explanations are often messed up, sometimes even illogical. 2/5 because somehow it still managed to catch my interest.Now to the characters. Well there ain't none. You can't call that characters. They are just means for the plot to go on. Even the main character. He has no definite personality, and changes depending on the plot's unfolding. And no, you can't pass this off as adaptability on the MC's part unfortunately. I'd give this a 0/5, but the minimum rating is one, so it's gonna be 1/5.The world development is there. It exists. A little bit. It could be worst, but it could be much better. 2/5Do I recommend it? If you have the patience, the time, and have nothing better to read then yes. But if you search a little harder, I assure you, you will definetly find something better than this to waste time on. There is nothing except Floid here. Go ahead I want to read Floid 20-30-40 times each chapter. Lol infinite mana, mc is weak as f#ck. This "guy" thinks it has something good in its hands lol The main character has a distaste for human nature and so he will not have any special relationship with any of them other than occasional sex.I'm already done reading this after seeing the synopsis lmao. That's one horny mc. How is that horny? Do you think that every sexual act branches off into a relationship? Because they don’t In novels? Yeah Well they shouldn’t Chapters Read - 100Rating - 5/10Written like a 12 y/o was the author. No concise story line - No world building depth - Extremely one dimensional characters - The plot makes little to no sense - Overall, its something to burn time with. The entire storyline is essentially just jumbled ideas together in the form of a wish fulfillment powertrip. The writing style is good. However, i just can't seem to get attracted to this novel because there's no direction of where the mc is going Skimmed one chapter and I'm out.Floid floid floid f#cking floid on every single paragraph