Chapter 18 IS THAT EVEN A SCRIPT?
Chapter 18 IS THAT EVEN A SCRIPT?
In a few minutes, Jonah was also here, going through papers, texting, and calling people.
She took a glance at us, waved, and then continued the talk she was having.
It seemed she was pretty busy.
It took her a few minutes to go through everything, and only after that, did she turn to us.
"I hope you are all ready?" She asked with a smile.
"Yes" we all replied.
"Great, then here are your scripts, just go through them for now, in 15 minutes you'll be called to the dressing room, alright?" she asked in a hurry.
"Got it."
"Good," she said as she handed us the scripts and left.
We flipped over the so-called scripts, but it was barely 2 pages long. It was mostly just the introduction and the end.
everything else was supposed to be improvised by the actor.
Apparently, because we were just amateurs appearing for a porn 'video' and not a film, the screenwriters didn't focus much on us.
even those two pages barely described what seemed to be a minute or two of the conversation.
Most of the lines were talking about the set, location, and just the expression.
The sex scenes were just written as
boy/girl/girl/girl scene
Which just meant 1 guy, 3 girls
And let me criticize the whole script itself-
By quoting the script
< MALE ON COUCH (TV PLAYING PORN) >
< MALE : "STILL A VIRGIN" >
< MALE PROCEEDS TO FAP >
< FEMALE 1, 2 ENTER >
< FEMALE 1: "IMPROVISE DIALOGUE (NATURE SHY, NERVOUS) >
< FEMALE 2: "IMPROVISE DIALOGUE (SUGGESTS SEX, (NATURE, ASSERTIVE ) >
< MALE: "IMPROVISE DIALOGUE" AGREES >
BOY/GIRL/GIRL SCENE
ENTER FEMALE 3
< IMPROVISE DIALOGUE >
BOY/GIRL/GIRL/GIRL SCENE
THE SCENE ENDS WITH FACIALS.
And that was basically all of it if we exclude the set and stuff.
This was the work of a professional writer-
I am pretty sure some 12 yr old who has just watched porn for the first time would be able to come up with something better than this.
I looked at the others once I had finished my script.
"So we have to come up with our own dialogues?" asked Ai
"Yeah probably" replied Tanith.
There was barely anything to even read in the script.
so we just sat there thinking about what dialogues we could use.
Soon the girls were called to the dressing room, and I was called up a bit later.
2 women were going on my face at blistering speed.
they were hogging the whole space in front of me so I wasn't even able to see what they were doing.
but they took their time.
Once they were out of my sight. I saw barely any changes to my face, though they had covered up every single imperfection on my skin it was barely noticeable and it looked almost natural.
After a while, a guy came in with a black t-shirt and denim for me to wear.
My current outfit wasn't much different but there were plenty of chances I might dirty my clothes so I agreed to change.
Not like I had the choice, but still.
After changing I was led to studio 1, which was the more vanilla studio.
Luckily the room we got had 4 walls.
The director wasn't there but Jonah and the girls were already there with 3 more people.
Who were checking the mics lights and cameras.
"you are late- I just finished explaining to them the course of action but I'll repeat it once for you.
Keep it natural, just do whatever seems natural wherever you can, no need to make it feel like an act. Also since we are specifically shooting virgin porn, just have sex, there are no mistakes just don't look directly at the camera, make no 4th wall breaking references, and also don't ask us to stop. We plan to just keep filming and after that, the best parts will be edited together. got it?" Jonah explained quite patiently.
"Got it. also don't we have a director?" I asked.
"I'll be the acting director for now, since this is just amateur virgin porn we don't really need a director to oversee you guys. Yeah although your recordings will be shown to the guy you met yesterday, he will be the one deciding what makes it and what doesn't."
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