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Chapter 108: Planning a New Book
Chapter 108: Planning a New Book
Chapter 108: Planning a New Book
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Having talked about things that could not be spoken about, Fan Ziruo was too embarrassed to take the initiative to speak again and waited for He Yunxiao to talk.
This deadlock could only be broken by He Yunxiao himself.
Ziruo, do you know how to write a romance story now?
Fan Ziruo lifted her head a little and said, Hmm. Its probably to portray more of the dialogue and interaction between the male and female leads. Writing the bland everyday life in a vivid and interesting way.
He Yunxiao immediately clapped his hands and said, Right! Thats it!
As expected of a female protagonist whose forte was learning, her learning speed was too exaggerated. With just a little nudge, she could instantly learn by example.
Now Fan Ziruo already had a story she wanted to write, so in order to let her write a story that everyone would love to read, He Yunxiao continued to guide her.
Ziruo. How can you make a dull life vivid and interesting?
Fan Ziruo thought for a moment and said, Characters.
Hearing the word characters, He Yunxiaos eyes suddenly lit up!
Then he eagerly asked, Tell me specifically, why characters?
Fan Ziruo was looked at by He Yunxiaos greedy gaze and said, Because its a romance, most of the time is spent writing about the interaction between the male and female protagonists, so according to the length of the novel, the plot of the male and female protagonists will take up most of the time. Because the plot is just about eating and sleeping. So if the main characters themselves are interesting, then the story will be interesting, I think.
If it wasnt for the fear of losing favorability.
He Yunxiao simply wanted to stand up and applaud!
Genius! A true genius!
In just half an hour, she had already figured out all the valuable experience I had gained over the years of stumbling around!
This is really
This
Im such a loser compared to Fan Ziruo
Since the favorability level was high, the current He Yunxiao could easily induce Fan Ziyous emotions.
Looking at He Yunxiaos suddenly sunken expression, Fan Ziruos originally pleasant mood, lost as well. Fearing that she was wrong and had caused He Yunxiaos disappointment, she asked timidly, Young master, is what Ziruo said wrong?
He Yunxiao denied it repeatedly, No, no, no, youre quite right. If you want to add colour to a bland everyday life plot, you just have to have a brilliant persona.
So, if you want to write a outstanding romance, you must have a colorful persona.
Seeing that He Yunxiao was in a good mood, Fan Ziruo was happy, and she immediately asked the most crucial question: What is a brilliant persona then?
This question was difficult to say, but also simple to say.
He Yunxiao explained, If you can feel that the person is a living, breathing human being, then he is a colourful persona. He should have a name, personality, hobbies, flaws, desires and so on.
He Yunxiao took out his manuscript paper and listed each of these elements on it.
You fill all of these in, then the persona is basically complete.
After handing this fill-in-the-blank manuscript paper to Fan Ziruo, He Yunxiao didnt stay idle, pulling out a new piece of paper and writing these elements again as a form for designing the heroines persona.
After writing, He Yunxiao looked up at Fan Ziruo, who was holding a brush and frowning in thought, and felt a little more settled in heart.
Hey, sister Ziruo, its not that easy to write a persona. When I was trying to think of a persona, I couldnt come up with one even though I was scratching my scalp.
Fan Ziruo is smart, but she is still within the realm of human. At most, she is a genius among human beings. She is much more real than a 16-year-old freak like Chu Xiaoxiao who is the best in the world. Even though she had a lot of knowledge in her belly, there was more knowledge that she didnt know than He Yunxiao, who had the most extensive knowledge.
He Yunxiao watched Fan Ziruo frown for a long time, but he didnt feel like disturbing her, and even blew on the ink on the paper that was still wet.
Later, when he got too bored, He Yunxiao pretended to be in a self-study class, like a teacher inspecting a students homework, and slipped behind Fan Ziruo with his arms folded to see what she had written.
On the paper, there was a sharp contrast between He Yunxiaos dog-like handwriting and Fan Ziruos beautiful handwriting.
He Yunxiao didnt think it mattered that his handwriting was ugly, but now that his dog-like handwriting was placed next to Fans beautiful handwriting, he really had the feeling of a toad on a swan.
It had an internal flavour.
Skimming over the general handwriting, He Yunxiao looked at the specifics of what Fan Ziruo had written.
Plot position: Male protagonist
Name: Xiao He
Cao!
Why is the main characters surname Xiao?
He Yunxiao was physically uncomfortable when he saw the surname Xiao.
Ziruo.
Even though Fan Ziruo was frowning and thinking, He Yunxiao couldnt care less.
When Fan Ziruo heard He Yunxiao call her, she immediately responded, Whats wrong, Young Master?
He Yunxiao pointed at Xiao He and said, Ziruo, can you change the name of the male protagonist?
When Fan Ziruo heard He Yunxiao say this, her face reddened slightly and she became nervous.
Young Master would not find out that Xiao He was actually a name based on the two homophones in He Yunxiao, right?
She asked sheepishly, Why do you want to change the name ?
He Yunxiao replied sheepishly as well, The reason for this is because Ive read a novel before that also used this name.
Fan homophone was so guilty that she did not dare to pursue the matter and hastily agreed to change the name.
She used a brush to cross out the word Xiao He and wrote Xiao Yun next to Xiao He.
He Yunxiao:
Xiao Yun is a thing, anyone who knows what it is will understand.
He Yunxiao was already dying of embarrassment, he said shakily, Ziruo, can we not use Xiao Yun either, can we change the surname?
Fan Ziruo was also very embarrassed, she knew that if she used Xiao Yun as a name, it would probably be discovered by her Young Master again, but she didnt expect that it would be discovered so soon.
Yes. What would you like to change it to?
Change it to change it to
He Yunxiao was self aware that he sucks at naming, when he wrote novels in his last life, he had to mull over a name for most of the day. After thinking twice and having no clue, all he could do was say, Haha, I dont know, just dont have the last name Xiao.
Fan Ziruo said Okay, took the brush, thought about it, and then stole a glance at He Yunxiao. His heart was slightly torn, but he quickly settled down and wrote He Xiao on the paper.
He Yunxiao:
He Yunxiao was completely speechless.
He Xiao was the name he had used in his previous life, and now, I dont know if it was a coincidence or what, but it had actually been written by Fan Ziruo by mistake.
He had already corrected Fan Ziruos name twice, but this time he could not do so again.
No one but himself knew that He Xiao was his former name anyway, and although it seemed slightly uncomfortable, it was much better than Xiao.
Fan Ziruo asked carefully, with a selfish feeling, Young master, is it okay to be called He Xiao?
He Yunxiao said helplessly, Yes ..
Fan Ziruo succeeded in her self-desire and said happily, Good, from now on, He Xiao, will be the male protagonist in my new novel.
He Yunxiao looked at Fan Ziruo so happy over a name and found something wrong.
He was an author himself, and there would inevitably be times when he would get entangled in personal stuff.
Fan Ziruo cant be having some bad ideas..
Ziruo, have you thought of a name for your heroine yet?
He Yunxiao was standing on the back side of Fan Ziruo.
When she heard He Yunxiao ask this, Fan Ziruo weak put down her brush, turned sideways, raised her face, smiled and said as if to please, Young master, the heroines name is Fan Zi, is that okay?