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The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima
The universe gave me another chance after life screwed me over. My second life brought... Read more
The universe gave me another chance after life screwed me over. My second life brought me to a world where people breath fire, walk on water and some people with special eyes that give them bullsh#t powers. Well, I got the gamer ability. And I’m gonna use it to stand at the peak. But it's gonna be a long journey before I reach that summit. ***SI - MC. Updates 3 to 4 times a week. Collapse
Transmigration, Game Elements, Overpowered Protagonist, System, Isekai, Male Protagonist, Reincarnated in Another World, Modern Knowledge, Weak to Strong, Eastern Setting, Fanfiction, Naruto, Gamer, Calm Protagonist, Eye Powers, Cautious Protagonist, Age Progression
SpoilerThe beginning of Naruto begins on chapter 255 if anyone is curious to know that hasn't read this yet.
Rank B This is in all categories from story, character development, plot development and consistency renders it a rank of B as of 05/23/2023 chapter 215.
Gave it a second chance and my god it is boring, the mc is a soulless puppet
I have a quetion for people who like this novel; Don't you feel annoyed with chapter long status notifications? I feel like 80% word space is wasted on system instead story progress, It wont be a problem for me if the chapters were long but they are so short yet author waste so much on reapeating the same info. I just couldn't deal with it and had to drop this novel. How are you'll dealing with it?
He realized that he was wasting word count and problonging dungeon runs so now there shorter and the author rarely shows the full staus page anymore and keeps dungeons to 2-3 chapters. So rn its pretty nice since I like the story.
-- This is the novel that you're getting yourself into --Are you bored with Naruto using Talk-no-jutsu???Introducing No-Talk-no-jutsu... The story will go exactly the same as the cannon, except Author being a parasocial so MC hangs around important characters without making any changes and replace Naruto when he use talk-no-jutsu in every crucial moments with the MC using no-talk-no-jutsu. Okay perhaps not that overboard...Chapter 12: 'Status' /// took almost half the chapter (Keep it up Author... Soon you'll be able to maximize the cheese status panel gives to the word count. Soon it'll be something like...)Chapter ???:'Status' MC muttered. -- Next Chapter -- Chapter ??? + 1: Skill:[5. Dishwashing - Passive (LV.1): A skill obtained through continuous dishwashing. With more mastery, you can clean any dirty spots with more speed.Effects: +5% increase in speed] /// This is an actual Skill the MC has in Ch. 12 -- Next Chapter --Chapter ??? + 2:Equipment:-- Next Chapter -- Amazing novel... *throws book at the Author's head AGGRESSIVELY*Oh- Nvm, it might come sooner than I thought... Chapter 18 Status panel took 3/4 of the whole chapter.Note: Jump Straight to Ch 24 after reading Ch. 1; u won't miss anything.---Okay I start to understand the actual value of this novel now... Author is actually proficient in making Fighting Narrations (Ch 62-63) this is geniunely good; really well thoughtout . Too many useless notifications. This novel is literally the embodiment of System to the point of cancer. I just wish Author toned down the notification instead simply showcase it in fights, or testing, or anything but the notification format; It's too repetitive.Those skill names, cooldowns, +%, etc... It doesn't hold any meaning if Author doesn't show its' actual difference in combat/testing. And most of the skill ended up never being shown the difference; cause there're simply too many... and they change too rapidly. All the Author end up doing with those notifications are, literally, creating FILLERS to get more word count; as if he didn't have enough from calling up the status back to back.Ch. 66- 67 -- when Author narrates cannon flashback... the quality of the narrative soar to the roof. But when it's something Author made on his own it plunge back down to sub-par.Ch. 71 -- this is what it mean by a 'Forced Plot'. MC literally has a skill to influence ppl's thought to aggree to his suggestions.----Overall: Author is only good when full fighting narrations, and narrations when it's full summary of the cannon flashback 1 to 1. Everything else? 3/5... I'm gonna bash it too hard. Cause once u get used to skipping and ignoring the obvious flaws... It's actually a pleasant read. (I mostly write this review after seeing how sloppy the uchiha massacre was handled by the MC and was writing out of spite... Literally if u read it u would understand. But starting from Chapter 75 things start to become 4/5) Another Noteworth Naruto Fan-Fic: "Reborn with Tenseigan"
Yeah they botched that shit (the uchiha massacre) as hard as Naruto Shippuden botched Madara
system novel without harem, big yikes.
"All u gotta do is scroll around the ranking list and u'll basically find harem with R18... If every novel is made horny teens like you, the website is fuc-""There's already a website like that called 'wattpad'." Jiraya interrupted."..."
no you
leveling with lust exist it is very horny but also decently good plot tho if you want the whole story you need to go to a different website if you like it and want the link to the website let me know after you read it
Reader who only likes harem, big yucks.
Harem sucks, let's be honest.I get why you and others like it, but... well, once you age a little, you'll naturally grow out of it. Unless you are a sexual deviant or something of some kind.Once you've seen reality for what it is, you will not want the shallow connections a harem builds.Harems are not love but merely lust. It's not worth the effort nor time.In fact, the best novels are those that inspire true emotions. Harem novels are incapable of that. They are simply too unrealistic.Lately I've awoken to the real truth: no romance. Without romance, there is time available for real plot, pain, angst and more pain. That's where I've found the best novels I've ever read.I'd advise anyone not looking for "fast food" (if you will) to take a look at the website Archive of our own (AO3). It's a bastion of fanfiction and wayyy, way, way better organised than fanfiction.net ever could be.There are millions of high-quality fics over there. And, well, if you wish to read those, there are also millions of smut and harem/multi fics over there as well.
you should be hunted down then sent to middle earth
The story is too slow, 121 Ch but still at the academy. If the aouthor keep writing with this pace. I higly doubt he will finish the story. Not to mention it is just fanfiction. So if you dont like slow pace story, this is not for you my guy.
I dont understand why fanfic writers bother writing slow paced story. We all know they're not gonna write thousand chapters novel.
True facts, but at the same time, when everything is rushed it lacks substance. I wish the academy arc was skipped every time. At the same time, how long is an average arc? I wrote a fanfic with 180k words, (300k+ views) and wrote like 2 arcs and was wrapping up the third arc before I got super bored. Rushed stories lack character development. But hey, very few fanfictions can finish. For fun writers just lose hella motivation when getting smack talked all the time. When you get 400+ likes on a chapter, but the next is 200~ you just don't feel like writing anymore.
Every fanfic of naruto world disappointed me in one or two ways, some of them had a harem tag (which seems to me much more illogical than having a system in Naruto world), and some had overwhelmingly strong mc from the start which killed the joy of reading the story, or novel like "Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi" (Good in the start, average in the middle part and horrible development for the latest part). Here mc has his huge cheat but has to work hard to achieve something. He has an interaction with the main characters of the story but his influence on the whole story only increases statically. Till the latest chapter, it seems worthy to read and even to donate to the Author for his hard work.
indeed, great read so far.I hope it keeps being so.
#panic# add harem tag pls~
Author said it was going to be harem. Lolz.
im out then, naruto world with harem is the last thing i want to read
Usually I'm not a big fan of fanfic but this was really well done, excellent work.The story is well written, engaging, and creative.
- Chapter 80: Origin of a Teacher Student Bond
- Chapter 280: The Abducted Sannin
- Chapter 283: Rescue Tsunade Senju
- Chapter 3: New Beginnings
- Chapter 6: New Home
- Chapter 9: Exploring the village
- Chapter 12: Hiruzen and Daichi
- Chapter 15: Hiruzen's Thoughts and Kensei's Suspicions.
- Chapter 18: Completing the First Month Training
- Chapter 21: One Year Training 02
- Chapter 24: First day of the Academy
- Chapter 27: First Dungeon Run - Training Ground 43
- Chapter 30: Dungeon Boss Fight - 02
- Chapter 33: Interlude 01 - Kensei, Hiruzen, Sasuke
- Chapter 36: Training and Relaxing
- Chapter 39: Gamer's Mind and Brewing Trouble.
- Chapter 42: Indomitable Stat and Atamagai' Cloak
- Chapter 45: Reo Uchiha and Training for 2nd Dungeon
- Chapter 48: Battles in the 2nd Dungeon 01
- Chapter 51: Battles in the 2nd Dungeon 04
- Chapter 54: Powerful Growth
- Chapter 57: Interlude 02 - Daichi and the Rookie 6
- Chapter 60: The Favor
- Chapter 63: The Various Ninja Arts
- Chapter 66: Uchiha Clan Massacre - Prelude 01
- Chapter 69: A Promise Made
- Chapter 72: Dark Deals Made In The Shadows 01
- Chapter 75: Half Truths
- Chapter 78: Shape Transformation Training 02
- Chapter 82: Show of strength
- Chapter 85: Fear - A Powerful Motivator and Deterrent
- Chapter 88: The truth is, My Ability is...
- Chapter 91: Fire Affinity
- Chapter 94: Academy 4th year
- Chapter 97: The Art of Genjutsu
- Chapter 100: Kensei's Hate
- Chapter 103: Water Affinity
- Chapter 106: Battle on the 5 Floors.
- Chapter 109: Hypotheticals
- Chapter 112: Fire Capital
- Chapter 115: The Bet With Tsunade
- Chapter 118: The First Step of a Medic
- Chapter 121: Medical Ninjutsu - Tests and Skills
- Chapter 124: 5th Year End
- Chapter 127: Interlude 07 - Daichi's Training / Rookie 9's Exam
- Chapter 130: Path to Transcendence
- Chapter 133: Attack of the Root
- Chapter 136: Short Rest in the Land of Iron
- Chapter 139: Training in the Land of medicine
- Chapter 142: Kensei's Friends
- Chapter 145: Graduation
- Chapter 148: Genin Test 02
- Chapter 151: A Rare Decision
- Chapter 154: D Rank Missions
- Chapter 157: Battle with Kakashi 01
- Chapter 160: Battle with Kakashi - Conclusion
- Chapter 163: One step forward
- Chapter 166: Quest: Acquire the Spring water.
- Chapter 169: Rivals & Training
- Chapter 172: 1 vs 3
- Chapter 175: Decades long Mystery - Solved?
- Chapter 178: Treasure - Part 02
- Chapter 181: Meeting the Fire Daimyo
- Chapter 184: Interlude - Around the World 01
- Chapter 187: Another Ripple...
- Chapter 190: Reanimation: Tobirama Senju
- Chapter 193: Nature training: Water
- Chapter 196: Save the Nephew of the Minister.
- Chapter 199: Capture the Mercenary
- Chapter 202: The Second Quest
- Chapter 205: Plundering Hidden Jutsu
- Chapter 208: Training Naruto
- Chapter 211: C Rank: Retake the Fortress 02
- Chapter 214: Backup Team Guy.
- Chapter 217: Battle on the High Seas 01
- Chapter 220: Battle on the High Seas 04
- Chapter 223: Demon Island Laboratory
- Chapter 226: Dungeon Training/Jiraiya's Warning
- Chapter 229: Supernatural Stamina & New Skills
- Chapter 232: Ice Affinity
- Chapter 235: Quest: Heal Jin 01
- Chapter 238: Quest Completion & A Secret Meeting.
- Chapter 241: Katsuya Hinoo
- Chapter 244: Sealing Arts
- Chapter 247: A New B Rank Mission
- Chapter 250: Protect the Mediator 02
- Chapter 253: The Betrayer
- Chapter 256: Graduation Day Debacle: Prelude
- Chapter 259: Daichi's Mission & Naruto's Graduation
- Chapter 262: Sasuke's Choice & Shikamaru's Plan
- Chapter 265: Escaped Prisoners
- Chapter 268: A Prisoner's Choice
- Chapter 271: The Forbidden Scroll Incident 02
- Chapter 274: Iruka's Resolve
- Chapter 277: A Night of Revelations
- Chapter 286: Interrogating Mizuki 01
- Chapter 289: Daichi's Fury 02
- Chapter 292: Powerful Ninjutsu
- Chapter 295: Point of no return
- Chapter 298: Ambush 02
- Chapter 301: The Crystal Style user
- Chapter 304: Valuable Prisoners
- Chapter 307: Quest: Infiltration
- Chapter 310: Raiding Orochimaru's Lab - 01/02
- Chapter 313: A potential prey for Akatsuki
- Chapter 316: Interrogation: Ibiki's Mind Games
- Chapter 319: Danzo Gears up.
- Chapter 322: To Each his Own
- Chapter 325: Daichi's Wrath
- Chapter 328: Obito's Miscalculation
- Chapter 331: Anbu vs Root
- Chapter 334: Hiruzen, Danzo u0026 Tobirama
- Chapter 337: Root Siege - Conclusion.
- Chapter 340: Leaf’s Military Operation 01
- Chapter 278: Daichi's Request & Investigations
- Chapter 281: Trouble on the Horizon
- Chapter 1: My Second Chance
- Chapter 4: Shi Fang's Restaurant
- Chapter 7: Training 01
- Chapter 10: Library And Ichiraku Ramen
- Chapter 13: Yamanaka Flowers
- Chapter 16: Chakra Control and Body Conditioning
- Chapter 19: Finding My First Dungeon
- Chapter 22: One Year Training 03
- Chapter 25: Academy Dungeon, Race and Bullies
- Chapter 28: Beasts of Dungeon Ground 43
- Chapter 31: Dungeon Boss Fight - 03 (Final)
- Chapter 34: Meeting Ren Uchiha
- Chapter 37: Beginning the 2nd Year
- Chapter 40: Rescue Mission with Rookie...6?
- Chapter 43: The First Ripple.
- Chapter 46: 100 Intelligence and 2nd Dungeon.
- Chapter 49: Battles in the 2nd Dungeon 02
- Chapter 52: New Quest and Skills
- Chapter 55: Training Plans and Shortcuts
- Chapter 58: Interlude 03 - The Council Elders and Ren Uchiha.
- Chapter 61: 1st Special Stat Awakening
- Chapter 64: Testing the Mana Skills
- Chapter 67: Uchiha Clan Massacre - Prelude 02
- Chapter 70: A Safe Haven
- Chapter 73: Dark Deals Made In The Shadows 02
- Chapter 76: The Shinobi of Darkness
- Chapter 79: Shape Transformation Training - Final
- Chapter 83: Meeting the Copy Cat Ninja
- Chapter 86: Legendary Ninjas
- Chapter 89: Inner Fears
- Chapter 92: Meeting Rock Lee & 3rd Year End
- Chapter 95: The Hokage's Visit
- Chapter 98: Sense Evolution and Skill Progress
- Chapter 101: Decisions Made
- Chapter 104: Follow the Root
- Chapter 107: Reaching the ninth floor
- Chapter 110: 4th Year End
- Chapter 113: Meeting the Sannin
- Chapter 116: The New Apprentice: Daichi Hekima
- Chapter 119: Seek the Hidden Truth of the Necklace
- Chapter 122: 5th Year - Life in the Capital
- Chapter 125: Interlude 05 - Rescue mission/ Uchiha Bloodline
- Chapter 128: Interlude 08 - The Power of Senju and Uchiha
- Chapter 131: 25 Million Chakra Points
- Chapter 134: Daichi's Counterattack
- Chapter 137: Interlude 09 - Cold War
- Chapter 140: 6th Dungeon
- Chapter 143: Back to the Leaf Village
- Chapter 146: Teammates
- Chapter 149: Genin Test - Final
- Chapter 152: The 2 Man Genin Team
- Chapter 155: A New Style & Skill
- Chapter 158: Battle with Kakashi 02
- Chapter 161: Trust & Truth 01
- Chapter 164: The Daily Life of a Genin
- Chapter 167: Daichi, the Medic!
- Chapter 170: Ninjutsu Mastery of Tobirama Senju
- Chapter 173: C Rank mission & Chain Quests
- Chapter 176: The Thief's Identity
- Chapter 179: Treasure - Part 03
- Chapter 182: Ryuga Hino?
- Chapter 185: Daily Life of a Genin 02
- Chapter 188: An Ominous Warning
- Chapter 191: C Rank: Search & Destroy... A book?
- Chapter 194: Joint D Rank Mission
- Chapter 197: Quest Failed?
- Chapter 200: Live or Die: Make your Choice
- Chapter 203: B Rank Mission: Conclusion
- Chapter 206: Birthday Plans & First Tier Seal
- Chapter 209: A Birthday Party & Sinister Plots
- Chapter 212: C Rank: Retake the Fortress 03(Final)
- Chapter 215: Team Guy's Trap and Crisis
- Chapter 218: Battle on the High Seas 02
- Chapter 221: Battle on the High Seas 05(Final)
- Chapter 224: Abandoned Lab & Hidden Agendas
- Chapter 227: Rasengan Variants 01
- Chapter 230: Blooming Flood
- Chapter 233: A Winter Holiday
- Chapter 236: Stat Boost
- Chapter 239: Possible Motives & A Good Time
- Chapter 242: A Possible Alliance
- Chapter 245: Everyone has an Agenda 02
- Chapter 248: Protect the Mediator 01
- Chapter 251: Meeting Sai.
- Chapter 254: A Common Enemy
- Chapter 257: Rookie 9: Graduation Exam 01
- Chapter 260: Tobirama's Suspicion & Mizuki's Trick
- Chapter 263: Shikamaru's Plan 02
- Chapter 266: Capture
- Chapter 269: Mizuki's Agenda
- Chapter 272: The Forbidden Scroll Incident 03
- Chapter 275: Bloodline Awakening.
- Chapter 284: Speculations
- Chapter 287: Interrogating Mizuki 02
- Chapter 290: The Hokage's Ultimatum
- Chapter 293: Vital Clues
- Chapter 296: Akatsuki Moves - Target: Daichi Hekima
- Chapter 299: Fierce Battle in the Forest 01
- Chapter 302: Dynamo Resonance
- Chapter 305: All Eyes on Fire Nation
- Chapter 308: A Tense Night
- Chapter 311: Raiding Orochimaru's Lab - 02/02
- Chapter 314: Battleplans
- Chapter 317: Interrogation: Inoichi's Mind Probe
- Chapter 320: Daichi's Inner Conflict u0026 Obito's Greed
- Chapter 323: Daichi Strikes: Root Under Siege 01
- Chapter 326: Daichi vs Danzo
- Chapter 329: Hidden Jutsu of the Yamanaka Clan
- Chapter 332: Hiruzen u0026 Danzo: The Last Fight
- Chapter 335: Danzo's Mistakes.
- Chapter 338: Tenzo u0026 Kakashi
- Chapter 279: Clash of Legends: Orochimaru vs Tsunade
- Chapter 282: Sinister Plans
- Chapter 2: Waking up as Daichi Hekima
- Chapter 5: Ambitions
- Chapter 8: Training 02: Unlocking a Special Stat
- Chapter 11: Hokage Monument
- Chapter 14: Inventory Skill and Chakra Unlocking
- Chapter 17: Special stat - Sense
- Chapter 20: One Year Training 01
- Chapter 23: Kensei's Motives and End of Training.
- Chapter 26: Taijutsu Spar with Sasuke
- Chapter 29: Dungeon Boss Fight - 01
- Chapter 32: Testing Jutsus and Leaving Dungeon
- Chapter 35: End of the First Academic Year.
- Chapter 38: The Mysterious child and Chakra Training
- Chapter 41: The Friends We Make.
- Chapter 44: Kensei and Hiruzen
- Chapter 47: Shadow, Illusion and Tank.
- Chapter 50: Battles in the 2nd Dungeon 03
- Chapter 53: 2nd Dungeon Boss Battle
- Chapter 56: End of the 2nd Academic Year
- Chapter 59: A Decision to Make.
- Chapter 62: The Calamity Tiger - Kensei Yasaji
- Chapter 65: 3rd Year and A New Teacher
- Chapter 68: Itachi's Decision
- Chapter 71: Erasing Reo Uchiha
- Chapter 74: Uchiha Massacre - Aftermath
- Chapter 77: Shape Transformation Training 01
- Chapter 81: Enemy Ninja Attacks
- Chapter 84: The Rasengan
- Chapter 87: Nature Transformation - Earth
- Chapter 90: 3rd Dungeon
- Chapter 93: Interlude 04. And the Ripple Effect Continues...
- Chapter 96: Hiruzen's Plan
- Chapter 99: I Am Not Alone
- Chapter 102: Sasuke's Ordeal
- Chapter 105: Conquer the Castle
- Chapter 108: 4th Dungeon Completed
- Chapter 111: Leaving The Leaf Village
- Chapter 114: The Test
- Chapter 117: 5th Year and Medic Training
- Chapter 120: Sculpting Skill and Lightning Nature
- Chapter 123: Unknown skill and New Title
- Chapter 126: Interlude 06 - Danzo's Plans
- Chapter 129: 6th Year Begins
- Chapter 132: My Luck and a 'Surprise' Attack
- Chapter 135: Attack of the Root: Conclusion
- Chapter 138: Land of Medicines
- Chapter 141: Returning to the Fire Capital
- Chapter 144: 6th Year End
- Chapter 147: Genin Test Part 01
- Chapter 150: Team 7 - Fail
- Chapter 153: System Rewards & First Mission
- Chapter 156: First C Rank Mission
- Chapter 159: Battle with Kakashi - 03
- Chapter 162: Trust & Truth 02
- Chapter 165: A Hatred Born out of Nothing.
- Chapter 168: Military Tactics
- Chapter 171: Team Guy VS Team Kakashi
- Chapter 174: The Legendary Thief
- Chapter 177: Treasure - Part 01
- Chapter 180: Treasure - Part 04 (Final)
- Chapter 183: A wild theory
- Chapter 186: Observe the Diplomats
- Chapter 189: Men make Plans...
- Chapter 192: Sins of the Father
- Chapter 195: First B Rank Mission
- Chapter 198: Interrogation
- Chapter 201: Jedayu's Revenge
- Chapter 204: Dungeons and Kages
- Chapter 207: Tier 02, Life Return & Kakashi's Promise
- Chapter 210: C Rank: Retake the Fortress 01
- Chapter 213: A Second chance & Backup Request
- Chapter 216: A Plan of Attack
- Chapter 219: Battle on the High Seas 03
- Chapter 222: Katsura Sadoshi
- Chapter 225: Dungeon Training/ Dark Plans
- Chapter 228: Rasengan Variants 02
- Chapter 231: Interlude: Orochimaru's plans
- Chapter 234: Powerful Growth 02
- Chapter 237: Quest: Heal Jin 02
- Chapter 240: The Third Prince
- Chapter 243: Everyone has an Agenda 01
- Chapter 246: Everyone has an Agenda 03(Final)
- Chapter 249: Negotiation Tactics
- Chapter 252: Capturing Root Ninjas
- Chapter 255: The Prankster of the Leaf
- Chapter 258: Rookie 9: Graduation Exam 02
- Chapter 261: A Fake Test & A Bad Omen
- Chapter 264: A Sacrificial Lamb
- Chapter 267: Save your Friends
- Chapter 270: The Forbidden Scroll Incident 01
- Chapter 273: The Forbidden Scroll Incident 04
- Chapter 276: The Forbidden Scroll Incident(Final)
- Chapter 285: Orochimaru: Path from Light to Dark
- Chapter 288: Daichi's Fury 01
- Chapter 291: Daichi's Strategies
- Chapter 294: Danzo makes a move.
- Chapter 297: Ambush 01
- Chapter 300: Fierce Battle in the Forest 02
- Chapter 303: Fierce Battle in the Forest (Final)
- Chapter 306: Shizune's Fear
- Chapter 309: The New Player On The Board
- Chapter 312: Tailed Beast Chakra
- Chapter 315: Tobirama's Anger
- Chapter 318: Battleplans u0026 Preparations
- Chapter 321: Daichi's New Target
- Chapter 324: Daichi's Calculations: Root Under Siege 02
- Chapter 327: A Ghost to Chase
- Chapter 330: Friends to Foe: Hiruzen vs Danzo
- Chapter 333: Opposing Philosophies
- Chapter 336: Tobirama's Suspicion/ Danzo's Request
- Chapter 339: Your mission: Should you choose to accept...